Reading 09: The Review Must Go On

 

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I was sad to see that no one had reviewed my chapter besides Irene, ah well, it was my own fault for missing class. This week I went through my colleagues chapters, unfortunately Nasim hadn't uploaded anything. Emma had cut down a few things in the middle of the chapter and it reads much better.

I cut down a lot of places where I tend to go on a tangent that has nothing to do with my topic.

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