Reading 08: Touch Ups


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 I was pretty happy with the feedback I got about my chapter, the fact that it was too long was a good thing for me as I believe its easier to have something be too long and cut stuff out than have it be too short and have to add a bunch more words. Essentially what I've done is taken out all the fluff from my chapter and spruced up my bibliography, I really wasn't thinking when it came down to putting a link into my text lol. I also need to stop spelling Gary Gygaxs name wrong, I think its just autocorrect changing what I tye behind my back.

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